One Piece 584
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Status: CONFIRMED SPOILER
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Summary
Title: The Porchemi Incident
Cover: Crocodile and Mr. 1
Luffy is tied to the post/tree with a rope
Luffy “Let me go! (I changed this because I think they made a typo) I won’t say anything!!
Porchemi: Damn brat!
Another pirate brandishes a giant mallet and gets pissed
The sound of the giant hammer’s impact sounds out within a small hut on the mountain of garbage.
Luffy is being flattened by the hammer
Luffy: ….!!
The pirates get up and scream
Luffy: I ate the gom gomu fruit.
Pirates: Gyaaaaaaaaaah
Porchemi: ….
Porchemi: ….? A devil fruit? This is the real thing. Bring the gloves.
Pirates: ?!
Porchemi: Listen you dram brat, what your friend Ace stole from us was our crew’s precious money.
Luffy is strung up with rope
Porchemi: You know where it/he is…so tell us!
Bam!
Luffy: !!!
Porchemi beats Luffy with spiked gloves and Luffy bleeds
Blood splatters
Pirates: ……! It worked!!
Porchemi: Don’t offend pirates…our captain Bluejam is a brute.
Luffy’s blood drips like water while he cries and is shown dealing with great pain.
Luffy: Gyaaaaaaaaah it hurts! I’m scared!! Save me!!
Luffy’s voice sounds out throughout the mountain of garbage
Porchemi: You guys, go look for Ace and Sabo.
Pirates: Y-yes sir!
The scene changes to a forest in the Gray Terminal/Colb Mountain?
Sabo: Hurry hurry! If Porchemi and his gang make it here we’re through! Hurry and move the treasure to another place--there’s also the problem of how long it takes that Luffy guy to fess up!
Ace and Sabo take out the treasure and money in haste
Sabo: If they come here they won’t just take this time’s treasure, but our pirate savings for the past five years!
At one part of Colb mountain there’s two goons looking for people and a mass of homeless people.
Guy in a hat: You say you don’t know Ace and Sabo? You’re the dregs of this town…stop protecting those two.
Guy with a child: Don’t look down on them because they’re small…they’re mad dogs that can devour a tiger.
Guy carrying a small sword: Ace and Sabo…I don’t see them. More important than that…you guys give us something worth money. (Totally not sure about this)
The two goons: !!?
Evening
Ace: Didn’t notice it was night…alright! We’ve moved all the treasure!
Ace is ontop of a rock under a tree
Sabo runs in desperate to the rock Ace is at
Sabo: Hah…..haa….Ace!!
Ace: Sabo! How was it? Did they come to look for the money over there?!
Sabo: Ha…haaa…nah they didn’t come to search! That Luffy guy….he still hasn’t talked!
Sabo speaks while trying to catch his breath and Ace is shocked
Ace: Huh?!
A map explaining Gray Terminal is shown. A bay with pirates?
The Bluejam pirate ship is shown
Bluejam: They sure are late…hey…who was responsible for today?
Pirate: That rascal Porchemi, Captain Bluejam!
Bluejam: It’s already getting dark…How much money could he have taken? That *******…there’s no way he took the money and ran, right?
Pirate: No…no way….
Bluejam has messed up teeth and a weird hairdo (I think)
Scene changes to Luffy who is all messed up
Porchemi: Cut the BS and spit it out! Ha….ha…
Porchemi is out of breath and pounding Luffy and a pirate tries to stop him
Pirate: Po-po-po-Porchemi! It’s useless!
Luffy is beat up, crying and covered in blood
Pirate: This guy…he’s even lost the energy to shout! He probably won’t say anything…this is so brutal I can’t watch.
Porchemi: If you have time to protect this brat then go find Ace and Sabo! It’s our lives that are on the line!
Porchemi knocks his underling away
Some dude that lives in the garbage heap sees this
Dude: To a kid like that!…Should we call the cops?
Another dude: No point. The law doesn’t reach out to this garbage heap. That man is one of the Bluejam pirates…they give money to the nobles…their crimes and murders are allowed in this land. No matter how many corpses this garbage heap gets…garbage is garbage.
Porchemi: Answer me!!
Luffy: …I won’t talk…
Porchemi: Damn brat, don’t protect secrets to become an adult! (I can’t localize this for the life of me lol)
Porchemi continues to pound Luffy, Luffy cries
Luffy: I won’t talk!!! I won’t talk!!
Porchemi pulls out a sword
Porchemi: Then enough! Die!
Luffy: ?!
Ace and Sabo: Stop!!!!
The two break into the shack
Porchemi: !!!!!
Pirates: These guys! Porchemi! These are the guys that took the money! Son of a *****!
Porchemi glares that them (I think)
Luffy: A--Ace!!
Luffy cries loud
Porchemi grabs Ace
Porchemi: If you’ve come yourself then this won’t take long.
Ace: ?!!
Porchemi: Your friend has a tight mouth and it caused me trouble.
Ace: Sabo!
Porchemi: Huh?
Sabo: Uwaaaaaaah!
Sabo hits Porchemi with the pole he had
Pirates: Porchemi!
The Pirates panic
Porchemi collapses
In the opening Sabo steals a knife from the pirates
Pirates: Ah! A knife!
Sabo cuts Luffy loose and runs away with him
Sabo: Run, Ace!
Ace: Go on ahead!
Ace waits as Porchemi gets up
Sabo: ?! You idiot!
Ace: Once we’ve faced each off I won’t run away!
A shot of Ace getting ready
Sabo: Stop it! Your opponent has a sword! He’s different from the punks in town!
Porchemi: Hey…you’ve done something wicked (I don’t know this) Why don’t you just quietly hand over the money?
Ace: We can use it better than you can.
Porchemi: Quit talking crap!
Porchemi gets pissed
Sabo: You…wait!
Sabo sets Luffy down and backs up Ace
Porchemi cuts both the pole and Ace’s forehead with his sword
Porchemi: If I lose to a brat, I’ll quit being a pirate!
Ace bleeds from his forehead and an angry Sabo jumps in
Porchemi is calm and Luffy is silent
Changes to nighttime
Bluejam: I heard the details…Porchemi is pathetic.
Pirates: Really? You…!
Porchemi is all beaten up
Porchemi: I’m sorry captain…that money was…
Bluejam: Don’t look at me. I don’t even want to see your face.
Bluejam shots Porchemi dead.
Scene changes
Luffy: waaaaah wahh or whatever
Luffy cries
Sabo: You’re so evil Ace! To say “I won’t run” up against a real pirate…why do you have to have a death wish like that?!
Sabo gets angry and Ace gets quiet again
Sabo: Ha…having done this Bluejam’s crew won’t forgive us…they’ll come after us now.
Luffy keeps crying
Luffy: I was scared…I thought I was dead.
Ace: Shut up! How long are you going to cry for? I hate weaklings and crybabies, they get on my nerves!
Ace gets angry and slaps Luffy, he stops crying.
Ace: Oh.
Luffy: ….thank you.
He bows his head to Luffy and Sabo
Ace and Sabo: ….
While thanking them he begins to cry again
Luffy: Th…thank you for saving me!
Ace: You ***!
Sabo: Hey hey! He’s just thanking us.
Sabo stops the angry Ace
Ace: Anyway…why didn’t you tell them?! Those guys would kill a woman or child without a problem!
Luffy: …if I talked, we couldn’t be friends anymore.
Ace: Not being friends is better than dying! Why do you want to be friends with me so much? Just how do you look at me? You’ve gone and followed me all this way!!
Luffy cries all teary/snotty
Luffy: But I have nobody else to depend on!
Ace: ?!
Luffy: I can’t go back to Fusha village, and I hate mountain bandits! If I didn’t go after you…
Ace: …….
Luffy: Being on my own…being alone is so painful for me!!
Ace: Your parents…?
Luffy: I don’t have any other than gramps!
Ace: So if I’m with you it’s not painful…if I’m not with you…you’re troubled.
Luffy: Yeah.
Flashback
“What if Roger had a child?! Gahahaha it would suck for that guy!
“He is birth and life wouldn’t be forgiven! A demon!”
Back to present (as in the current flashback)
Ace: You…want me to live?
Luffy: ?!….Of course I do!
Ace: I see…but I hate naïve little brats like you.
Luffy: I’m not naïve/mushy!! I’m strong!!
Ace: Strong? How are you strong? Even though you’re a man you cry!
Luffy: Have you ever been punched with a spike?! I’m 7 years old! When I turn ten like you I’ll definitely be strong and not cry!
Ace: Even if I was seven I wouldn’t cry! You idiot! Don’t group me with you!
Luffy: I’m going to be stronger than everyone! I promised Shanks I would be a great pirate!
Luffy and Ace are spreading fireworks
Ace: A pirate? You?!
Sabo: Hey…by the way…a problem has come up for me.
Ace/Luffy: ?
Sabo: Up until now I’ve lived in this garbage heap…but as of today our lives are being sought after by pirates, right?
Scene changes to Dadan’s hideout
Dadan: What the hell is the meaning of this?! Ace! Luffy! Who is this guy?!
Sabo shakes hands with the shouting Dadan
Sabo: Yo! You’re Dadan? I’m Sabo.
Dadan: Sabo?! I know that name! I heard you’re quite the damn brat!
Sabo: I see…I’ve also heard that you’re a damn ol hag!
Dadan: Unnecessary information!
“By being chased, Ace and his good friend Sabo now live together in the uncertain gray terminal”
They head out toward the mountain from the hideout and are yelled at by Dadan.
Dadan: you guys! I have to look after you so do some work!
Ace: Luffy! Don’t follow us!
Luffy: I’ll follow!
Ace, Sabo, and Luffy. Soon these three would do nothing all day and night but fight with the beasts of the mountain road and jungles, and town’s punks, the scoundrels of the garbage heap and the bay’s pirates. This bad reputation would soon come to the land and reach the streets.
Dadan: Dogura! Magura! Where is “Goa”?
The turban guy is probably Dogura
Dogura: Well, in general, this Colb mountain, garbage heap, and Fusha village are all part of the dominion of the Goa Kingdom.
Dadan: Right?
Magura: (Not sure about this line, but I think it’s commenting on Dadan rarely reading a newspaper)
Dadan: They say a visitor is coming to this land? It’s becoming kinda big news…but what an uproar…is this guy really such a big deal? A “Tenryuubito”.
Ends showing the hideout.
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Anyways, here's a few corrections.
It's only a matter of time until Luffy fess up!
Listen kid, don't think you're all tough by keeping your mouth shut!
(not a literal translation, 一丁前 means acting like a capable individual, when you're not)
Porchemy: Hey.... something just got into you to make you do this, right kiddo? C'mon, just hand over the money, brat....
魔がさした is an expression meaning acting out on impulse, and didn't really mean it.
Sabo: That habit of yours is terrible, Ace!
Ace: So if I'm around, you won't feel painful? .... without me, you'd be in trouble?
(Sorry Steven, that just sounded.... yaoifood hehe)
"Sabo, Ace's best friend who was chased out of Gray Terminal, and now lives with him"
Ace: Luffy! If you can't follow us, we'll leave you behind!
Magra: Well, well boss!! You're reading a newspaper!? It must be raining spears today
(apparently she never reads newspapers lol)
Dogra-Magra is a famous Japanese mystery novel, btw.
Oda got the names from it.
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Status: DISCUSSION
by: hellfire32
Well, this is a real wind down, of course it was bound to happen considering how much action the manga had for the last seven or so chapters. Luffy is going to go through A LOT of flash back until we can actually get to the present time line. I'm going to lay out a prediction and say that the guy that Ace was meeting with is dead. Or he became a part of Ace's crew. Of course we all know what happens next in terms of the time line. Luffy gets taken Ace and his friend go and rescue him, that is probably how Ace's friend dies. From then on Luffy and Ace share the dream. Of course there is always another possibility that Ace's friend just took the money and ran off or changed his mind and used the money to support the people in his area. Who knows were going to have to wait for the flashback to end. During this flashback is probably when the time skip takes place, when we come back to the present time, we will be seeing Luffy fully recovered, possibly with his crew, or just finishing his training. Another senario I think might happen is when we get back to the present time we will be seeing Luffy still depressed and not straight I guess you could say. And Hancock managing to talk him through his depression, and a little naration which leads through the time skip and in one or two chapters we will come out one to two years later with Luffy much more powerful, his crew back together due to Reyleigh, and several others joining him.
